100 word challenge week #7


One day I decided to leave  because everybody was pressuring me. After a day I came back I didn't remember what happened. My parents said around my eyes were black and inside were red. They strapped me to the table. I was furious and trying to brake free but I couldn't at night my dad slept with  me. In the morning I was fine but my dad was gone. We search the hole house he was no ware to be found. Was  downstairs there he was as the door slammed I knew I was never going to see him again.

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  1. HillcrestBlog3October 31, 2017 at 6:46 AM

    Hello Eaor,
    This is an interesting interpretation of the prompt. It is creepy! You have used some descriptive vocabulary e.g. 'pressuring' and 'furious'. Remember to edit your work carefully; you have several grammatical and spelling errors. Well done on completing Week #7 of the 100 Word Challenge.
    Sincerely,
    Mrs. Van

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